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Dark Poetry #4
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Laney
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 85
Illinois
0 posted 2003-12-19 03:04 AM


Soon there will be nothing left of me

stale polaroids

let my naked face enter the world
rub mud on the starched white shirt

raw restrained wrists
swollen toungue

numerals become zero
organization becomes chaos
white canvas

She is awake during slumber.
© Copyright 2003 Alana - All Rights Reserved
Mad_Hatter
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since 2003-06-29
Posts 393
Canada
1 posted 2003-12-20 04:18 AM

I like this one alot, it reads so amazingly.  The images are so awesome, very nice piece.
Laney
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 85
Illinois
2 posted 2003-12-22 01:03 AM

thank you mad hatter... writing this piece was such a therapy as well.
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