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Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
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Mesa, Az

0 posted 2008-09-16 07:28 AM



I hold what is comparable to my fist
Feelings muted in the midst of her kiss

If only I might procure
What the mortal greed of our hearts compel

If only seams of myself could be found
I could rip the symmetry of my bounds

Cause if to be inclined by impulse so simply put as this
Bound by the statement

I insist…

Grimace

The self indulgence of repentance

If my choice were so simple
I wouldn’t see the ripple effect
But the stone that I cast
Sets in motion the reverbs of the past
I’ve seen those tides the highs and lows
The sounds of echoes from the
Vessels skimming the shoals
Her tides depend on the shadows cast by the moon

I hold what is compareable to my heart

Aim-DuWerdestBrachen
MSN- Tooshaysalesmen@hotmail.com

Yup YuP~

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GothicCherry
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since 2008-09-16
Posts 471
TN
1 posted 2008-09-16 08:45 PM


WHOA....WHAT A MIND. . . .
Mr.Trichomes
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since 2008-09-17
Posts 2

2 posted 2008-09-17 01:18 AM


yeah that was a mind fukc to bad i don't know shlt for vocabulary I might of understood that but seems/sounded tight.  
depressedivinity
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since 2008-09-19
Posts 6

3 posted 2008-09-19 12:24 PM


a work of art straight from a beautiful mind.

bravo.

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