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Ha! More Jokes |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time 
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As i pace the darkest alley of my soul brooding over the 'injustices' i've faced Ha! cynical humor at best I've taken plenty of rounds in the chest Fired from a gun called life loaded with rounds of heartache and pain my iniquities seep from the wounds hands stained dark in blood skin melted from reaching into the fires of my past No regrets Ha! more jokes laughter in my head as the words make their exit and fall upon naive ears Perpetually amused by my own ignorance yet stricken by curiosity reaching forth from that alley into the light i crawl fingers outstretched faintly gripping what's been lost so long as my fingers pass through the remanence of my soul I force my way into the light to face myself As i stare into the mirror I remember... love is pain life is never fair it's just what we make it. And i stand... again frightened but fighting on my own. "And behold, a pale horse, and the man who sat on him was Death, and Hell followed with him." - Revelations |
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wolfy09 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 93 |
nice write i really like |
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Yoinn Senior Member
since 2007-08-16
Posts 649Michigan |
Nice work here Kaos, Powerful images and strog verbs takes me there with you. I enjoyed it. One suggestion tho. I think i would like to see it without the joke theme. Jump into the darnkness and stay there. The "Ha" beginning lines pull me out of the mood you put me in previously. Just a thought dude. Yoin |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Nice..... Juju -Juju |
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