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angelfacegurl
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0 posted 2008-09-06 10:13 AM



theres so many things left to say
but i hold it in tell this day
my soul my heart
we will never be torn apart
i feel ur the one for me
theres so many things inside left to see
i feel feelings never felt before
like a whole new opening of a old sore
you make my sadness turn to light
i see this world with a whole new sight
this world would be somehow darker without you
after so many things life had put us through
after all the crying and hurt
lets cover that picture with dirt
like the 1st kiss from ur beautiful face
makes me feel worth it and in place
you give me a reason to wake up everyday
somehow u always make me feel great in someway
you say u miss me i miss u to
man this must mean im in love with u


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1 posted 2008-09-09 04:32 PM


"you make my sadness turn to light
i see this world with a whole new sight"

A very though provoking image and very well said! Some people do indeed open our eyes to things we've never noticed before.

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