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Dark Poetry #4

Ill watch over her

NormalitxButterfly
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since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

0 posted 2008-09-03 10:07 PM

" Ill watch over her"

Turning my back on the sun I kiss the moon
The wind breathes; the light closes its eyes
Within the deep darkness her freedom lies
She fixes her makeup by the moonlight
She leaves a prettier smile lingering in the mirror
Disappearing into the deep darkness
A long sigh blossoming through tears
well you save her; from the spider web that binds her
well you save her; from the lies that wormed into her soul
will you erase for her; the light she couldn't hold in her hands
will you shine it for her; ill watch over her
following her stumbling footsteps
A fate forsaken by heaven is subdued by its replacement
The sun has already swallowed the moon
Her goodbye tugs on my arm
The sleepless night embraced by death
The immortal heart I've prepared for you
I'll wash away the past with the rain
A long sigh blossoming through tears
Let this cold rainstorm resurrect the soul
What she becomes is what i was destined to be
these cold blue lips are confessing to me
Death is the start of a new life.

midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2008-09-03 11:11 PM

beautifully writen!!! i loved it!!!

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

2 posted 2008-09-07 12:18 PM

enjoyed this

I especially loved the line

"long sigh blossoming through tears"

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

wwzwlmd8
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since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

3 posted 2008-09-07 05:07 AM

i really like reading this

NormalitxButterfly
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since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

4 posted 2008-09-07 03:33 PM

i like this one too thanks ^_^

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's alright if i

JenniferMaxwell

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since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

5 posted 2008-09-08 11:47 AM

Nice work on this!

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