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Dark Poetry #4

define hurt?

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-08-02 01:22 PM

happy b-day honey

but once again i spent all my money

to u i am a expensive joke

but i cost less then ur speed or coke

but now im away no letter no call

im less important than a bingo hall

u make up lies to me and my brother

but still u say love me im ur mother

but u dont even earn that name

and i hope one day u will feel my pain

so u took my brother ur only sun

well all i got to say sonja is im done

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-08-02 04:05 PM

Yeah. What a mom. I like the poem. Hate the subject.

·´~`·»Brett«·´~`·

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

2 posted 2008-08-08 05:18 AM

hi... hope u can post some more. i like reading new posted poems...

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

3 posted 2008-08-08 06:21 PM

I can definitely relate.... I had a mother like that. Good write, doll.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

4 posted 2008-09-08 02:50 PM

I don't know who this is directed at in your life, if anyone at all, but I can especially identify with costing less than speed and coke and all the implications I see behind that.

Thanks for the read

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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