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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2008-08-31 02:23 AM


I don't even know why it came up
the thought of bones breaking through skin
the thought of a fine line of blood
skimming through my mind.
It was this anger
can't control it sometimes
and it
does things
I did not ask it to.
I am more than willing
to stay peaceful
hiding something worse than demons
behind my all day smile.
I am more than willing
to not slip away
into some dark corner with myself
and snicker
like a madwoman
at every evil thought.
But I am not willing
to pretend
that the something worse than demons
does not exist inside of me.

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

© Copyright 2008 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-08-31 03:26 PM


great poem.

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

viking_metal
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since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.
2 posted 2008-08-31 04:24 PM


If this poem could somehow manifest itself into a woman that wasn't states away, I would attempt to woo it.

The flavor of madness in every average person is magnified here. I love it. No gripes.

-P

Revon
Junior Member
since 2008-08-29
Posts 15

3 posted 2008-08-31 08:38 PM


I love poems about the demons within, we all have to face it at some points. It was great
Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
4 posted 2008-09-02 06:23 PM


Thanks everyone! My writing isn't what it used to be so its like I am starting over again as if I have never written.

Appreciate the input!

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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