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Dark Poetry #4

someone

angelfacegurl
Member

since 2008-04-17

Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-08-25 11:50 PM

sometimes i feel this i where i belong
someone to help me when im not so strong
someone to be there when i cry
someone to help me when i feel i cant try
someone to be there and tell me hi
some that will never say goodbye
someone to say i love you and mean it
someone who will never quit
someone to share lost memories to
can this someone be you

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

1 posted 2008-08-26 07:15 PM

great poem. i know this this feeling.
midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-08-26 09:13 PM

Awe, I love this. I think this is your best poem so far. Fantastic write.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Revon
Junior Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 15

3 posted 2008-08-29 09:44 PM

Ive felt like this before, its lonely ;[. I liked the poem

racer-boy
New Member

since 2008-08-31

Posts 9
united states, tx

4 posted 2008-09-01 12:17 PM

great poem. and dont worry youll find some body, just them come to u

live now

NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

5 posted 2008-09-01 12:45 PM

such a familiar feeling, great poem.i often wonder if its to much to ask that someone except and love you for all that you are.

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's alright if i

Revon
Junior Member

since 2008-08-29

Posts 15

6 posted 2008-09-01 10:48 AM

It really does hurt when someone you trust yourself with rejects you. Finding someone who just excepts you is rare...but beautiful to.

racer-boy
New Member

since 2008-08-31

Posts 9
united states, tx

7 posted 2008-09-02 01:51 PM

good wright. maybe me, maybe him, or maybe them.... you never know.

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