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spiral of sunbursts
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NormalitxButterfly Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 107 |
" spiral of sunbursts " over and over we make the same mistakes starting a new spiral falling downward vision attacked by monochrome sunbursts we always sa that the first time is the last time but the past never seems to stay in the past the spiral always continues starting over again spiraling downward awaiting the end twisted red ribbions fall to the ground trampled by footprints we don't utter a sound over and over we make the same mistakes falling in spirals forgetting how much blood it takes we disappear in monochrome sunbursts |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I like the message that even those mistakes with which we are familiar are fair game when it comes to repeating the same mistakes. Unfortunately, I did not quite understand some of the imagery here. What are the sunbursts supposed to be? Better yet, what is a sunburst? Life's short. Think hard! |
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NormalitxButterfly Member
since 2008-07-09
Posts 107 |
sunburst the bright burning of pain I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost |
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