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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand 
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lights off, now heartless. am i? throw myself into lust and love drenched in it all in too far, way too close hands. hands. lips. eyes. where are they? electricity, switch flicked off. skin to heart like ice to a flame you eat away in too far hes there hes here his skin his heart i prefer but you are nearer.. and im sorry i didn't mean to how can i explain you did everything right? my skin my heart belongs to him where is he? lights on fire out i can't give you me. as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I am annoyed that this doesn't have a reply yet. This is GOOD POETRY EVERYONE!!! **points while jumping up and down**  I loved the style you did this in, and everything it conveys. Enjoyed very much "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
um... I still like this!  "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
aw thanks haha i don't come on very often anymore so I've been forgotten! People don't choose to read me anymore!! but i am glad u like!! xx as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
How could anyone forget you, babe? electricity, switch flicked off. skin to heart like ice to a flame you eat away in too far ^ Best bit, imo. Love you. Belief is a beautiful armor but it makes for the heaviest sword. |
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