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Dark Poetry #4

The "Death" Card

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

0 posted 2008-08-10 04:10 PM

The "Death" card.
She stares at me.
She haunts me.
She taunts me.

"I am not death,"
She says,
"But change."
And her voice rings,
As I look for a way out.

I do not fear death.
I, like others,
Fear change.
"What am I to do?"
"Where am I to go?"

But change follows us,
No matter what we do,
Or where we go.

The "Death" card.
She stares at me.
She haunts me.
She taunts me.

Does she taunt you, too?

Arana Darkwolf

[This message has been edited by rachaelfuchsberger (08-10-2008 05:39 PM).]

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-08-10 06:55 PM

Yep, she does. I like this, it's like an answer I've know but just needed it confirmed. Great job.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2008-08-11 03:23 AM

Yes... change follows me.

Well written and I feel each word to my core. Thank you for your words, doll.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

lilshortcake
Junior Member

since 2008-08-11

Posts 10
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3 posted 2008-08-11 08:13 PM

I can relate to what you mean about change, good feeling in the poem and strong emotion.

from- the newbe Tammy

Talent is like food! You shouldn't waste it.

rachaelfuchsberger

Senior Member

since 2007-02-21

Posts 609
Las Vegas, NV

4 posted 2008-08-18 05:35 PM

Thank you all for your feedback....she still haunts me.

Arana Darkwolf

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