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Dark Poetry #4

Nothing but a Memory

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-08-07 07:59 PM

The pain I can see,
it's so clear.
there's no escaping it
no running or you'll fall
no screaming because it wont help
nothing but the dark
reminding me how alone I am
And so very slowly
it's ripping my heart to shreds of broken memories.
Soon we'll all be nothing but
distant faded phantoms
watching her slowly murder herself
untill there's nothing left.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans!...'cuase dat's just how I roll.."
{~Emily~}

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

1 posted 2008-08-07 08:21 PM

Nice...very nice.

You have evolved a lot since I was last here.

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

2 posted 2008-08-08 04:56 AM

nice yet so sad... keep posting!

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-08-08 03:58 PM

Thank you, and I will.

{~~&~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

4 posted 2008-08-08 06:39 PM

Nice piece... I enjoy it.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

NormalitxButterfly
Member

since 2008-07-09

Posts 107

5 posted 2008-08-10 04:12 AM

i like it

SilhouetteMarquis
Junior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 32

6 posted 2008-09-27 12:47 PM

This is a really touching poem, Broken. The way that you lead up to the end is a great way to immerse the reader.

Keep up the good work!

ken206573
Member

since 2008-10-14

Posts 487

7 posted 2008-10-22 05:06 PM

i am truly touch. i love your poem, hope to see more.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

8 posted 2008-10-23 05:32 PM

Thanks, And I hope you do too.

{~~*~~}

"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#}
{~Emily~}

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