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Dark Poetry #4
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PoetsPlay
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0 posted 2008-07-20 12:08 PM

I walk a road that is empty
I forge a path that is my own
This way of life is sometimes lonely
I walk this path a resolute stone.

I walk a road that is empty
I forge a path that is my own
What's right in life is never easy
I fight the current flowing against me alone.

I walk a road that is empty
I forge a path that is my own
My hopes and dreams are shattered near me
I know that for my sins I will atone.

I walk a road to hell now
It is filled with many people
My blood and tears have made me this
I walk this path forevermore.

Alexandra
© Copyright 2008 Alexandra - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-07-20 05:17 PM

loveee the repetition in this great write
Krysti
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2 posted 2008-07-20 05:43 PM

Great job! We all have been there before.. Hope things get better! and thanks for sharing..

Zach

"When you cried I wiped away all your tears.
" When you screaed I'd fight away all of your fears..
And I held your hand through all of these years

PoetsPlay
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3 posted 2008-07-20 07:43 PM

Thanks! I appreciate your reviews!

Alexandra
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4 posted 2008-07-21 12:02 PM

Alexandra.... I absolutely love the flow and repetition.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become
NormalitxButterfly
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5 posted 2008-08-10 04:24 AM

i agree greet

I leave to walk ahead, only to be lost
Even though I cannot see the end, I think

it's alright
I will leave on a journey at range, it's

alrig
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