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kaleanna Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 89TX, USA |
he doesnt see a problem as she silently dies inside and even though its not physical the wounds are there on her heart her heart has been hurt by the words he says and the looks he gives and even though no marks can be found they are still so very painfully real the kind words he use to say have given way to harsh words that hurt no compliments to be heard from his mouth and she starts to feel that she isnt worthy he speaks the words those 3 little words i love you but his actions speak louder than those 3 little words and the tears fall from her eyes as another wound is added to her heart as the hurt sinks deep inside He tells her she is too sensitive and to stop acting like a child and one day she realizes that even though its not "physical" that what he has done all these years is still abuse he has stolen her dignity, made her question her worth told her she cant do anything right and the list goes on her heart hurts so badly from all the harsh words he said she doubts herself, cries herself to sleep at night She starts to find her voice and she doesnt know what will happen but she has to take a stand. cause she knows deep down that she and the kids need better than this she deserves to have a real love one that gives her all that she needs instead of something that leaves invisible wounds Meesh |
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DarkAngel73554 Junior Member
since 2003-12-10
Posts 10somewhere in tha middle of nowhere |
~!good one~! ~!tichina keepin it trill against all oddz~! |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
 [This message has been edited by SharaRose (12-19-2003 04:14 PM).] |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
Invisible wounds, the ones that never heal. Well done.  |
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Kazeru Junior Member
since 2003-12-16
Posts 31 |
Wow, I really like your poem! I have seen up close what that kind of abuse can do, so I can fully relate to your writings... Your words touched me! Great work! ->Be thy angels? Nay We are just men!<- |
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