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XGarapanX
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0 posted 2008-07-02 07:38 PM



There is a thin line
between love and hate.
I hate you with all of
my love.

© Copyright 2008 ·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`· - All Rights Reserved
Falling rain
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1 posted 2008-07-02 10:12 PM


Wow.. few words and yet says so much...thanks for sharing

"And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion."

XGarapanX
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2 posted 2008-07-02 10:25 PM


Thank you, Poet. I wrote it with my whole heart.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

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3 posted 2008-07-03 01:22 AM


Brett yooh rock!!! dont think 4 lines have ever gotten me to reply b4 love this gunna have to come back to dark more lol
Krysti

XGarapanX
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4 posted 2008-07-03 03:15 AM


Krysti, you have made the sting of love seem almost worthwhile with your kind comment, lol! Thank you.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

i_am_patch!
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5 posted 2008-07-03 04:36 AM


you're incredible

forgive and forget,
live without regrets.

XGarapanX
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6 posted 2008-07-03 08:41 AM


You are kind, patch. What's incredible is that you think I am. Many thanks.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

i_am_patch!
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7 posted 2008-07-03 09:50 AM


just like the song goes;
"..a lot of hurt inside,
when love and hate collides"

it's funny that i feel the same way
about someone.
it was a hell to live with him,
and without him, i cant live.
i hate to admit that i love him..
there's so much to hate,and i'm
loving him..like hell do i care. hah!

"all things change, and we must change with them..."

XGarapanX
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8 posted 2008-07-03 10:18 AM


I understand, Patch. And I am comforted. I would dread to think that I am the only one who must enjoy the privilage of this sensation, lol!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

i_am_patch!
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9 posted 2008-07-04 02:46 AM


well then, i dedicate my new posts for you..
INSANITY" hope you like it.

"all things change, and we must change with them..."

XGarapanX
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10 posted 2008-07-04 05:46 PM


I did like it. And I am touched by your thoughtfulness. Thank you.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

A Romantic Heart
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11 posted 2008-07-05 03:00 AM


Oh my...my my..this one is my favorite!

~HUGS and

XGarapanX
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12 posted 2008-07-05 06:55 AM


I was curious what your reaction might be should you happen upon this, Romantic one. I'm pleased that it was a good one. I think you well understand the manifold meanings intended in this subject.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

graeshine2006
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13 posted 2008-07-06 02:51 PM


Funny, this one makes me sad and I don't know why... because I have not loved/hated that much? It did make me think though.  You have a way of doing that... and btw, you often belittle the magic of your work - which I call humility and find endearing and hope you keep - but, I always want you to know, that we all know your work is beyond wonderful.
XGarapanX
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14 posted 2008-07-06 03:27 PM


Once again I am speechless, really. I don't think quit so highly of myself as you. If I am humble, then I would define it as having been brought down to the grave in blood and pain, and living to appreciate what I am not. Thank you.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

BrittanyJ
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15 posted 2008-07-06 05:39 PM


Oh but you are a wonderful writter Garapan. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I loved this. Short, but sweet.

If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were.

XGarapanX
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16 posted 2008-07-06 07:03 PM


And you are a wonderful person for saying so, Brittany. Thank you very much!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

midnightdreamer
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17 posted 2008-07-06 07:12 PM


i don't get much short ones. but this one i get. great write!!

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

XGarapanX
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18 posted 2008-07-06 08:07 PM


lol! Awesome!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

fractal007
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19 posted 2008-07-06 10:58 PM


Robert C. Solomon compares hatred and love in his book "The Passions."  That was a neat book.  Anyway, this was a short and sweet poem.  What exactly you mean by hating with all your love could be fleshed out -- poetically of course.
XGarapanX
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20 posted 2008-07-29 01:12 PM


True, it can be fleshed out. But there are enough of those poems. I just wanted to get right to the stab in the heart and leave this as an "Everyman Poem... please fill in the blanks". Thanks for reading.

·´~`·­»Brett«­·´~`·

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