Dark Poetry #4 |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
There is a thin line between love and hate. I hate you with all of my love. |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Wow.. few words and yet says so much...thanks for sharing "And so the lion fell in love with the lamb....,"he murmured. "What a stupid lamb," I sighed. "What a sick, masochistic lion." |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Thank you, Poet. I wrote it with my whole heart. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Brett yooh rock!!! dont think 4 lines have ever gotten me to reply b4 ![]() Krysti |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Krysti, you have made the sting of love seem almost worthwhile with your kind comment, lol! Thank you. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
you're incredible forgive and forget, |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
You are kind, patch. What's incredible is that you think I am. Many thanks. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
just like the song goes; "..a lot of hurt inside, when love and hate collides" it's funny that i feel the same way about someone. it was a hell to live with him, and without him, i cant live. i hate to admit that i love him.. there's so much to hate,and i'm loving him..like hell do i care. hah! "all things change, and we must change with them..." |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I understand, Patch. And I am comforted. I would dread to think that I am the only one who must enjoy the privilage of this sensation, lol! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
well then, i dedicate my new posts for you.. INSANITY" hope you like it. "all things change, and we must change with them..." |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I did like it. And I am touched by your thoughtfulness. Thank you. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Oh my...my my..this one is my favorite! ~HUGS and ![]() |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I was curious what your reaction might be should you happen upon this, Romantic one. I'm pleased that it was a good one. I think you well understand the manifold meanings intended in this subject. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Funny, this one makes me sad and I don't know why... because I have not loved/hated that much? It did make me think though. You have a way of doing that... and btw, you often belittle the magic of your work - which I call humility and find endearing and hope you keep - but, I always want you to know, that we all know your work is beyond wonderful. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Once again I am speechless, really. I don't think quit so highly of myself as you. If I am humble, then I would define it as having been brought down to the grave in blood and pain, and living to appreciate what I am not. Thank you. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Oh but you are a wonderful writter Garapan. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. I loved this. Short, but sweet. If you love someone, let them go. If they come back, they were always yours. If they don't, they never were. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
And you are a wonderful person for saying so, Brittany. Thank you very much! ![]() ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
i don't get much short ones. but this one i get. great write!! midnightdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
lol! Awesome! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Robert C. Solomon compares hatred and love in his book "The Passions." That was a neat book. Anyway, this was a short and sweet poem. What exactly you mean by hating with all your love could be fleshed out -- poetically of course. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
True, it can be fleshed out. But there are enough of those poems. I just wanted to get right to the stab in the heart and leave this as an "Everyman Poem... please fill in the blanks". Thanks for reading. ·´~`·»Brett«·´~`· |
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