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Dark Poetry #4
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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto
0 posted 2008-06-24 02:00 AM


Episodes of
Hellish fright
Awaken from
Every night
Dreams entomb
Turn to horror
Wrists gashed through
Krimson flowing over
Death of kind
Self betrayal
Hands of mine
Inflicting final fatal


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since 2008-05-13
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1 posted 2008-06-25 08:21 PM

I love it..dark and bloody. YOu really said how you feel in such few words...this is a true sign of a great poet. Straight and to the point, but leaves you thinking all day long! Good.
Abbeon
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since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
2 posted 2008-06-26 04:19 PM

Wow, ihave not been to pip in a while, and you dont know how happy i am that yours was the first poem i read. If Every one writes as good as this, I Will be living on poetry. This was amazing, so much Emotion in so few words. Amazing Thank you so much and keep on writing.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive
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