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Again
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since 2008-05-13
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0 posted 2008-05-13 06:48 PM


I don't know what you see
When you look at me
But I will be true with you
I got what it takes
To make this happen again
If you only see my failure
*Baby* you dont see it all.
I tell you again
I have what it takes
To make this fourish once again
Believe me and take my hand
You wont regret it

I've watched you
I'v listened to you speak
And I like what you have to say
Trust me it can happen again.
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since 2008-01-31
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1 posted 2008-05-13 08:11 PM

Wow such emotions.. I've ben through this soo many times.. you really know how to connect with your reader.. or in other words, GREAT JOB!!! lol

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."
Again
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2 posted 2008-06-25 08:18 PM

Thank you, I am trying to do just that, connect with the reader....your comment means a lot.
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