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voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2008-06-02 10:55 AM

You make me laugh

( Yeah right only in my head)

Sometimes I smile I swear!

( Only once every mid-summers night)

I'm not bleeding anymore I promise!

( Oh okay so I've shed some blood when I think of you)

I love being alone its such a great experience!

( Well maybe not at all actually I hate it!)

My friends hate me and despise me so much!

(No not exactly hey noones perfect!)

I love the sweet kiss from a guy I meet!

( I prefer ones that I'm in love with.)

So you ask me for advice? About what I'll tell you anything about my life!

( Ok I lied maybe not my life is my own private library)

A song you ask? You want me to sing?

(Well of course I will as long as you're not around!)

I'm sorry what'd you say? Oh you want to read a poem?

( Well you're reading one aren't you? God people are so hard to please these days!)

What? A love poem?

( No thanks because these days when they say love they mean sex)

Take my words and fulfill them as your own!

( No I was just kidding maybe I should go home?)

To love thee once and love no more

( I'm sick of this rhyming what do we do it for?)

A laugh? A smile? A kiss on the cheek?

(I guess with everyday you'll never know who you'll meet?)

My last words to you aren't coming from my heart

But what I truely know and what I've earned

A thought in my mind lesson learned

These are my words so don't take them from me

Please now leave me alone

Let me breath

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2008-06-02 10:56 AM

This poem is about expressing yourself and I did hope it gets you guys motivated!

Kate

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

2 posted 2008-06-02 09:11 PM

great poem!!

midnightdreamer

"It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2008-06-03 01:09 PM

Thanks you always love my poems and I'm glad that you do it makes me write more!!

Kate

SummaTyme
Junior Member

since 2008-05-31

Posts 13
GA

4 posted 2008-06-05 10:07 AM

Great way to express yourself It kind of made me laugh because I often fell that way.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

5 posted 2008-06-09 10:35 AM

I'm really glad that you liked it and of coures I loved your poems as well!!

Kate

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

6 posted 2008-07-11 10:53 PM

Kate.... I've been gone awhile... and I'm sorry I didn't respond to you when you reached out.

This is powerful and beautiful.... the many faces of Kate. I love your words... and they way that you use them.

~~~Amanda~~~

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Gasken
Junior Member

since 2008-07-12

Posts 20
Cebu, Philippines

7 posted 2008-07-12 09:07 AM

Wonderful you've got there.. Hope u will write poems that can really touch lives.. God Bless.. (--,)

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

8 posted 2008-07-13 03:16 AM

danng.. really made me think

Krysti

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

9 posted 2008-07-20 11:56 AM

That was really great! It kind of fits my mood right now, so that makes me more appreciative than usual.

Alexandra

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

10 posted 2009-12-16 03:49 AM

thank you everyone however like i said I don't write til over a year later!!!

Kate

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