Dark Poetry #4 |
Nocturnal Prince |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Encircling you in beams of moon, your words haunt of worlds parallel resonating both beauty and sorrow, some thing a c h e s, poetic passages surge from depths of you, perverse, as they are sensual, you are blessed and tainted as the chords of rain that play light as mist in air, then strike the part of me that is dead, as i f e e l YOU in a pounding beat, as the night comes to crescendo, midnight extinguishes the glow off the moon's full face, as i h e a r YOU in chimes that speak the soul of rain, as you craft your words, like an oracle chrisening dead white, where you birth LIFE and pierce inside me, D E E P you are the extremes called up from worlds within, that created and still claim you, as they stay, always one beat beneath you, You ARE the Beauty of the Darkness, noctural prince, you are ringed by your path, that both embraces and burdens, i a w a k e n to your calling, in the tempestous wind, the relentless rain, you are moving closer in, i f e e l YOU along this soul that waits, in hungered desire, to b r e a t h e in the rapture of YOU, through the winter's trees, now possessed, by the hollow echoing within, alongside me, as we stand bound to earth's superficial gate, in a wind raped field this night, on scraped knees we bleed of life and death in sync, as they cry out beside me, for release, to be filled in again with shades of you. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-13-2003 11:35 PM).] |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wow...very thought provoking and long! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
written like a true Goddess . . . |
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teenpoet Member
since 2001-10-17
Posts 280Michigan |
Positively beautiful. it may be long but it's worth every word, every word invokes images beyond recall and it's really quite beautiful...sorry...I love this poem, I love the imagery and the pain and the joy and the taste of this poem. Okay, so i'm babbling? Oh well, i'm adding this one. I only know myself...and even that I don't know well. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks bboy, my dear as always and suzieQ, love u girlfriend, stay warm up there and teen, thanks, yes i know its long, so long i always wonder if i should not do that, but it just poured out |
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xaos Junior Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 35 |
Very powerful, it seems to move between being tragic and inevitable, I really like it |
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Shereen Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 57Michigan, USA |
What can I say? Sometimes we need to let the words pour out - no matter where they land. All poets are bound by one thing - emotion - and you have tapped yours vividly. Very good. Shereen. |
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