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angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI

0 posted 2008-05-24 08:49 PM



life is like a t.v.
you cam change the channel
or keep it te same
life is like a flower
it can die or it can grow
life i also like a baby
you never know what it wants


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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-05-25 03:45 PM


the first four lines i really love, great!

JJ

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member
since 2008-05-19
Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A
2 posted 2008-05-25 10:36 PM


True SO True

            ~Savana

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