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Dark Poetry #4

One More Try

onemoretry
New Member

since 2008-05-10

Posts 5

0 posted 2008-05-11 02:14 AM

I've been here before
and I've already played this game
I'm eager to tell you more
but there's too many people to blame
Wondering what's in store
but afraid it'll remain the same
This is the muse I can't ignore
so it's time to change my name

Things I've already said
so what is truth and what is lie
I turned away instead
from a crutch that I can't deny
It's the drug inside my head
maybe someone can tell me why
When there is nothing left to gain
I want to give it one more try

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2008-05-11 04:05 PM

enjoyed your rhyme pattern~~ and message

M

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-05-11 06:12 PM

Great poem, and welcome to PIP. I hope to see more from you soon.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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