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Life is a battle never to be won
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Life is a battle never to be won |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
An emotion that can be seen from far away A breath of words, everything I want to say The emptiness that lies within my heart The tears that fill my eyes, when were apart Something I know now, that I didn't before Its like my life is trapped in a cage, a prisoner from war Do I fight for my life or what I believe in? But no matter what in this world, I never win My voice is now a tumbleweed blowing in the wind It still was never heard, small, tiny, very thin I look behind me, but there is noone I see Why do we live in this world, if noone is free Its a battle between rags and riches The life we choose, noone knows what this is No matter what of the age we've become Were still trying to figure out life, one by one First alive in this world for a short time Then what?To be forgotten, just to read this rhyme? Even though you're here right now Just think of what will happen later- when, why and how? Our lives are nothing just shortly lived So make the most of it now, cause you'll be nothing missed Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
This poem is of course about living your life but still wondering what will happen later on? Kate |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Nice, very nice. I like it.  ~Zach~ |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you glad you like it hope other people will. Kate |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
cool. i love it!!!! midnightdreamer "It was heaven........right in the center of hell" Bella from New Moon |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you I'm glad you liked it!!! Kate |
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