A dead lonley heart of sorrow

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Dark Poetry #4

A dead lonley heart of sorrow

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-05-01 05:38 PM

Feeling low in the floor,
so low I'm not caring to
get back up again. Under
all the pain and sorrow I
will lie forever, tell my
dead heart that the world
may have cared.
I'll leave to my forbidden
grave and sleep alone as you
wished me to all along. No
longer breathing for you, my
heart no longer beating.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-01 05:52 PM

Few words can explain the perfection in this poem . Great work! And hope things get better!

~Zach~

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-05-01 11:43 PM

I'm sure it's hardly perfection, but whatever. I'm glad u enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.

{~~*~~}

{&]ebbing.away.from*my.pain.}}
{~Emily~}

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