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Dark Poetry #4
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Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14
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Pluto
0 posted 2008-04-17 07:52 AM

Seek discover

Ultimate truth

Describe as no other

Feelings shall do

Keeping its image

All of the pain

Some of the causes

Of possible blame...



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midnightdreamer
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since 2008-02-03
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Roy,ut
1 posted 2008-04-18 09:04 PM

nice. i felt like this. not anymore though. great write!!
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.
PAiGEY
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since 2008-05-01
Posts 13
victooriaa
2 posted 2008-05-02 02:18 AM

i didn't really understand this one.

But still really is beautiful.
You clearly have some talent.
Keep it up

x.paaige.x
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