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Reborn
Junior Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 13

0 posted 2008-04-01 07:35 PM

Kings, Queens, and Servants

Is it not better to be loved than to love?
those that are loved are Kings and Queens,
with white silk robes and rose pedals at their feet,
their servants? Those that love them,
I can only cry for those who fall in love,
endless pain and disappointment shall be your blanket,
shivering at the slightest touch,
always nervous,
weakened and frighted by a stare,
a kiss will paralyze you,
addiction and obsession is in the air you breath,
like the living dead, you shall crave,
jealousy will feast upon brain,
lies becomes truths
and truths shall be ignored,
you will be lobotomized,
enslaved,
your money will leave you,
friends will be seprated from you,
you will physically feel pain,
and your lover will never love you as much,
nothing will ever be enough,
the hugs will not be tight enough,
the sex will be too short,
time together will fly,
passion will reach it’s limits,
and then you will be left alone,... again

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

1 posted 2008-04-01 07:48 PM

oh, this was indeed dark emotion. Touchingly dark.
very good.

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-04-01 10:31 PM

oh so true, we always seem to be giving love and never reciving. good poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-04-02 01:44 PM

wow, this was very nice and so true

eternally_singing
Member

since 2007-12-18

Posts 123
PA, United States

4 posted 2008-04-02 05:50 PM

very well done, I especially liked

Is it not better to be loved than to love?
those that are loved are Kings and Queens,
with white silk robes and rose pedals at their feet,
their servants? Those that love them,
I can only cry for those who fall in love,

At night a candle's brighter than the sun

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-04-03 10:59 PM

wow i love this poem. its so sad yet different kind of sad. i really like this.

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

Tears-of-Sanity
Member

since 2007-09-05

Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts

6 posted 2008-04-07 11:42 PM

That was really something.
It is the first time I come across a poem of that kind. I understand it all that it makes me think a lot. You have done great, so thank you for sharing...

Tears of Sanity~

Jaki H
Member

since 2008-01-19

Posts 232
NJ, USA

7 posted 2008-04-13 08:19 PM

oh gosh! wow..... this is one of the best things ive read in a long time! youve gotta change the title though.. people wont realize theyve stumbled upon brilliance!!!

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