Dark Poetry #4 |
Good Girl |
vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Shut up!", I said to none but me "You think too much - just let me be! I've listened to you far too long and what have I to show?" Nothing... not a single thing for years of doing what was 'right'' The 'good girl'... that was me you know but underneath, this very day, a rebel angel grows her wings - finds her too long muted voice and hears the music's rhythmed breath... She moves her body to the dance and smiles because she breathes ~Vicky L. Raynes When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-30-2003 11:11 PM).] |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
a good girl, yes that is me. Isn't it funny how being good can make you feel bad. that clean is oppisite from dirty. Ironic. Nice poem...got my brain juices flowin' ~Lex |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"not a single thing for years of doing what was 'right''" Oh yes... love it Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I always thought there was someone else hiding there sis *smile* xxoo |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"She moves her body to the dance and smiles because she breathes" Great ending, Vicki. I enjoy reading "freedom". coyote :0 "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
WARNING WARNING WARNING You are in the mind of serenity. Please observe the safety drill. Proceed to the illuminated exit in an orderly fashion and remember our rules of courtesy. Be advised--THIS IS NOT A DRILL. And at any cost, MY GOD/DESS WOMAN--REMAIN CALM!!! (And of course? Have a very "Disney" day!") ROFL... Don't say you weren't warned lady! Hugs and chuckles... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (10-03-2003 10:21 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
smiling and serenity and wanting to cry after what vicky writes. thanks sweet lady And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
THIS...I love..... Doesn't it feel good to breathe..... hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams [This message has been edited by dgvarner (10-13-2003 09:03 PM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Aha - The Other Side of Vicky... kewl... |
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