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Dark Poetry #4
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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
0 posted 2008-03-20 12:18 PM

a drop of blood
hits the counter
because by blade
just sliced away my
anger

I had carried it
for too long

but is my blade
a friend
or enemy

will it help
or
harm me

right now it helps
as it over rides
the pain
from my heart
and mind

but as i clean up
my shameful mess
i ask myself
why do i do this
why isn't life different
why im i not normal
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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-03-28 12:21 PM

this is a mediforical poem (ops i think i spelt that wrong)

JJ
midnightdreamer
Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309
Roy,ut
2 posted 2008-04-19 09:04 PM

agian this is how i feel in life sometimes
midnightdreamer

black beautiful eyes looking back at me telling me, no fear will show.
Desirer4New
Member
since 2008-04-23
Posts 57
basketball soccer writting and anything to do with art
3 posted 2008-04-24 09:41 PM

i ask myself the same quetion..
i really liked this..
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