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Dark Poetry #4

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JenniferMaxwell

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since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

0 posted 2008-03-06 01:03 AM

it’s one of those days aluminum gray
pitted and pocked by a wailing rain
that drags a chained dirge down from the mountain
through my fragile valley of lilies

dark ribbons of loss weave through the nimbus
cloud covered world’s black ledger of time
red ink on your page orphans my heart full
of moon shadows and indigo hills

lifting my face to a familiar rain
I see you awake burst into flame
a shadowless sun a circle of light
a seasonless green in my valley

theiamsadsong
Junior Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 17

1 posted 2008-03-06 05:05 AM

this poem is so dark, it's truly amazed me! the word chice is so precise and clear. your poem really spoke to me...
love,
monica

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

2 posted 2008-03-06 11:18 PM

thanks very much, monica.

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