Dark Poetry #4 |
love |
Gurl_unknown_11 Junior Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 17california |
what would you do? if i said i cared cared about you with all my heart what would you do? if i said i think about you all the time? that you never escape my mind what would you do? if i said everydream is about you that i dont want to wake up cuz i know you wont be there what would you do? if i said i loved you and have loved you for so long that ive wanted to hold you to see you to comfort you to be with you what would you do??would you push me away? what would say you wanted the same what would you think would you love me to what would you do if only you knew..... |
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Sir_Vampire Member
since 2007-06-12
Posts 96Johannesburg |
First of let me welcome you to PiP and i hope you enjoy your stay :-) A very touching poem, i really enjoyed it hope to see more soon, keep up the good work you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
very good... |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
great write and welcome to PIP!! And i can't wait to see more of your work! keep up the great writing! ~Zach~ |
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