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Dark Poetry #4

A Fresh New Look at Life.

xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

0 posted 2008-03-03 04:43 PM

A fresh look at a new life is hard.
Drugs destroying bodies and people throwing the race card.
Intelligence diminishing through the shadows of drugs.
Stupidity sweeping the earth like an enormous bug.
Society disappearing and replaced with ignorance.
Propaganda forcing people to buy life insurance.
I will say this and I will say this sincere.
If this is the way life is going to be I will end mine right here.

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-03-04 01:17 AM

wow, powerful ending. at first i was wondering what the poem would turn into, but now i know and understand what you're talking about. Great job, and welcome to pip.

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xTr3m3sT
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 415

2 posted 2008-03-04 03:15 PM

Thank you for your comment :-D

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-03-24 03:31 PM

this was very good

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-03-24 04:56 PM

deep meaning nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

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