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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois 
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No one cares, No one see's Whats that called? *oh yeah* invisablity No one see's, No one say Why do I care anyway? People ignore, they don't see Whats going on inside of me. A love burning passion as hot as the sun Maybe a sesitive guy who wants to have fun? But that won't happen, they can't see What can happen, What can be... People ignore, they don't see Cause I am invisablity ------------------------------------------------ Most of the time i feel invisable. And when ever people notice me i dont know what to say so i might say something stupid. but yeah i wrote this when i was supposedly "invisable" or "not noticed". How many of you guys feel like this? i know atleast everyone has felt this once. ~Zach~ |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
This is an really good poem. It reminds me so much of myself actually. And yes, most people feel invisible. I feel like that all the time. I'm just inivisible cause everyone judges me about my life. But, enough about my messed up life, good poem! I hope to hear more from you soon. TJ SheSmilesWithAllSheHasLeft.YetHerTearsAreLeftUndried.AndThoughShe'sGotSoMuchToSay.SheBottlesItUpInside |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
We all have our moments of invisiblity.... sometimes I actually prefer them. good write, doll |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
I hate being invisable. though if i had a choice i would rather be invisable rather then being seen. Great poem!! midnightdreamer |
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