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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2008-01-14 10:57 AM


Anger, time to let it out and begin again

Depression, what I suffer and have for so long

Family, they say that they're always there

Love, whether itsfamily, friends, or even your true love

Defeat, willing to accept the fact that it will happen

Voice, you have it, so use it, say what you want and don't hold back

Stressed, several people are like that so try to let it go

Forgiveness, sometime in your life you'll want to let it out

Touch, a sense of who you are and letting others in

These are simple words that can change a life in an instant

Whether you believe it or not I've seen it happen

Simple words like I love you, can save a life

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 2008-01-14 11:00 AM


This poem is about saying those simple words you know you have to say and you just need to let it out, no matter what

Kate

tonyV
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2 posted 2008-01-15 04:57 PM


I understand where you're coming from. It's just those raw emotional words than can at times make or break a person.


voice2bheard
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3 posted 2008-01-16 10:27 AM


Thank you glad you understand, thats what I want readers to feel about my poems

Kate

voice2bheard
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4 posted 2008-01-16 01:24 PM


Thank you

Kate

voice2bheard
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5 posted 2009-12-16 04:48 AM


HHM?? YEA I THINK I NEED LOVE!! NOW!

Kate

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