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Today is the day
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Today is the day |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Today is the day, to tell someone how you feel Today is the day, that someone I care about is leaving Today is the day, I got accepted to college, now I don't know how to afford it Today is the day, another child was born, and another person died Today is the day, I use my voice and speak out among others Today is the day, that noone will put me down Today is the day, you read this and tell me what you think Today is the day, the day after yesterday Today is the day, we open our hearts and try something new Today is the day, we eat, then starve tomorrow Today is the day, that our troops are still over seas Today is the day, someone got married, and someone divorced Today is the day, we will look pass all of our wrong doings Today is the day, someone found a cure for aids Today is the day, that our president is black or even a women Today is the day, when for once we don't have to worry Today is the day, you tell me your story Today is the day, you realize you need to start living the best you can Today is the day, today no, right now Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I hope someone relates to this and gets the meaning of this poem really my quote of " live every day likes its your last, because before you know it it'll be gone. Kate |
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dragoon Junior Member
since 2008-01-09
Posts 19 |
I thought it was a good modern topic and the message was clear. I think you may have used a different way of the line : day after yesterday. It gets used a lot. Maybe try something different that means the same thing there. dragoon |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you for your honesty whether its good or bad as long as you tell how you interpret the poem its fine Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
YES AND STILL IT CONTINUES ON!! Kate |
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