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The Black Rose
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The Black Rose |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Silence, nothing is to be heard but the wind Silence, your voice is a whisper not to be heard In a land far away layed a dream that can only be imagined, never seen There was a garden filled with may flowers but one stood out above all The Black Rose, in the mist of several others While every other one, bright cheery red The Black Rose stood in the center, as if dead For what would bring about this weary flower as if it loss hope, happiness, no power Maybe its a sign, death or danger Someones maybe come about, a frightening stranger Why The Black Rose is there silent and still noone knows,,or if its something killed The Black Rose, however isn't for all to see Very few have seen it, several don't believe Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
This poem is very deep hopefully someone can relate. Its about trying to be different unique, shows that not every part of your life can be as happy as you want it to be. Kate |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
There are sections I can relate to. Very good poem. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you Kate |
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surrealpoetics Junior Member
since 2008-01-13
Posts 13Spokane, Washington |
i really love this work, it truly touched me, right here (*points to the heart) where it counts. i shall be watching your works with great interest... ~Valdron Je suis de mon coeur le vampire, — Un de ces grands abandonnés Au rire éternel condamnés Et qui ne peuvent plus sourire! — Charles Baudelaire |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you glad to know that I have a fan of my work, I try my best and everything written is honest and comes from the heart Kate |
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PoetsPlay Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 56California |
I really like this! Great! Alexandra |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
i really like this and can relate something thats stupid but works isn't stupid |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you glad you relate Kate |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
hahaha sounds like me!! it's verry capturing, it gets ur attention! good job! FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Glad you can relate Kate |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
yes this me again. yes this poem relate to me...........a lot beause i'm different form everyone else it's just that when your different like me and you go to a school like mine with very rude boys and girls then maybe it's better that your not different. But i can't change who i'm and i wouldn't want to. i love your poems. midnightdreamer |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you I'm really glad you like them midnight dreamer!! Kate |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Kind of like the Sasquatch or Loch Ness Monster, but I believe and I see it..... John |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Kate.... another fabulous work. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
thank u mystress may your one of my biggest fans i see. Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
WOW YEA I LOVE IT STILL! Kate |
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