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voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2008-01-30 10:56 AM

The touch of the innocent, well deceived

The plead of the guilty, never seen

For when we are to go out on our own free will

While several lives are torn, erased, killed

Another life will clearly meet

Nothing will ever be what it seems

To believe in nothing thats never there

The blind eyes that don't see, will never care

A life to live, freedom thats torn, erased, killed

Why live with such greed and hate in our hearts

When the lives that we live, tare us apart

When time can only stand still for so long

Another life lived vanished now gone

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2008-01-30 10:57 AM

This poem hopefully will relate to someone and its suppose to mean to live your life out

Kate

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

2 posted 2008-01-31 08:50 AM

I really love your poems, I relate to them greatly, Wow I write weriod, I'm going to read more of your beautiful, so bye bye

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

3 posted 2008-02-02 01:45 PM

The poem is powerful, and the meaning clear, and yet it seems to me to have diffrent paths hiden amongst the shadows. I like your writing i hope to read more of your work.

Thank you, Abbeon.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

Lordadon
Junior Member

since 2008-02-14

Posts 18
Singapore

4 posted 2008-02-15 03:04 AM

great job on this, for someone who wants to start to live his life to the fullest all over again, this will be a great inspiration for him or her.

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

5 posted 2008-02-20 11:31 PM

Kate.... one of your best works that I've had the pleasure of reading!

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

6 posted 2008-02-22 12:00 PM

thanks im really glad you all love my work! ill try to keep making more.

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

7 posted 2009-12-16 04:36 AM

wow i seriously make myself cry!! i love them!!

Kate

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