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mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

0 posted 2003-12-08 02:29 PM

I know this is dark for the Season and all. I Apologize if this isn't the right time to post this. I'm not sure why I really wrote this, now?

It came across
the vastness of the warnings
like a malignant torrent of sills.
Altered in prayer, they cried
this human desire,
the lust, which kills.
Call me,
unleash me from these gates
your daily offering will begin.
As told -- I am the pretender of splendor.
The creator of sin.
My journey lists the surface
of your wants, your lead.
I’m looking, for the hungry ones
for blindness to feed.
I am for the ones
who wish for the coins.
The needy some.
The bleeding some.
To heal, and,
To join.

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

1 posted 2003-12-08 02:40 PM

...No matter why you wrote it when you wrote it...its splendid....well done...
Until...ali {alibaster the Queen of Darkness}

Until...ali {alibaster "the Queen of Darkness"}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."(C)alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratc

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-12-08 03:11 PM

poe, don't you ever apologize for your timing . . its astounding
and mannn . . . those coins , yes
*shivers*
*smile*

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

3 posted 2003-12-09 11:30 AM

- alibaster, thanks for stopping by and for your kind response. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again.

poe

- lw, as always, I look forward to your visits. Thanks so much.

poe

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-12-10 06:18 PM

poe-f-it, timing doesn't mean a thing, i liked this one...a lot...
"I’m looking, for the hungry ones
for blindness to feed.
I am for the ones
who wish for the coins.
The needy some.
The bleeding some.
To heal, and,
To join."

yep, i feel the same as of late, fantastic my man, fantastic!

"So what befalls the flawless?
Look what I've built, it shines so beautifully now watch as it destroys me."

Mad_Hatter
Member

since 2003-06-29

Posts 393
Canada

5 posted 2003-12-10 09:25 PM

Oh wow! I loved this poem so much. It's amazing. You were right on time with this one

, post whatever you want whenever you want, especially if it's this good.

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

6 posted 2003-12-11 08:02 AM

- eor, good to hear from you again. Thanks again for the support. I hear you have been busy. Miss your writing. Later my man.

poe

- Mad_Hatter, Thanks for your boost in confidence. Really appreciate your response. Glad you enjoyed the write. Thanks again.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

7 posted 2003-12-11 04:20 PM

What has time to do with anything when you produce such a lovely poem. Maggie

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