Dark Poetry #4 |
a vampires life |
SxcBabyEyes16 New Member
since 2008-01-06
Posts 1Australia |
when you get bitten your inner vampire comes out to play you start to feel the hunger and you burn up during the day What have you become ? a monster of the night, drinking those dear to you and bleeding them dry Sarah was your lover and nows shes dead, you killed her love and layed her to rest You became immortal, you can not die living a life of lonely times you wait and wait for you prey biting there necks and return at bay But now you forget that hunting is a sport and then you hear a knock at the door for those who were lost that can never be found, were missed and now the people ARE HUNTING YOU DOWN hey everyone im new here and thats my poem and i hope u like it |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Very cool. I feel like this could go on.... hehe.. You can try and hunt down a vampire, but odds are you will be getting your ass handed to you as they are much stronger, smarter, and quicker... but they make excellent lovers! Just keep a muzzle on them in the sac and dont cook them anything with garlic in it.. that will tick them off lol WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!! <3 <3 It is an honor to be your first replier!!! I hope you find the blue pages to be home. |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
omg i loved it!!! vapires are tight!!!! it needed a little work but for the most part, it was great hope u write some more o n WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! If i had to choose between you and breathing, id use my last breath to say "I love you" |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Moderator, please delete this reply. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I am a vampire. Blood gives new life. Bleeding releases death. Welcome to pip. Everything in your poem is exactly as you say. You must be a perceiver... God bless, -In Christ, Jesus loves you Keep your pants on, Jesus loves you |
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surrealpoetics Junior Member
since 2008-01-13
Posts 13Spokane, Washington |
i liked it, very cute |
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PoetsPlay Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 56California |
It's good! I like vampires (or vampire stories) myself. You might want to look over your spelling, though. Welcome to pip! Alexandra |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
have u read Twilight by Stephenie Meyer?? thats about Vampires!! and i luve it with all my heart...ok not that much but it's awesome. anyway good write! hahahah FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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