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vnessaluvsu New Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 6 |
forget his name forget his face forget his kiss his warm embrace forget the love that you once knew remember he has someone new forget him when they played your song remember when you cried all night long forget how close you once were remember he has choosen her forget how you memorized his walk forget the way he used to talk forget the things he used to say remember he has gone away forget his laugh forget his grin forget the dimples on his chin forget the way he held you tight remember hes with her tonite forget the time that went so fast forget the love that was it's past forget he said he'd leave you never remember he is gone forever |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Welcome to this ever growing circle of poets and friends~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Wow this opem is very strong and I can relate I loved it great work!! Maybe you could read some of mine if you like?? Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
sry ment to say poem lol Kate |
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vnessaluvsu New Member
since 2007-12-10
Posts 6 |
o thnx every body u guys are nice |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
I really needed to read this right about now. Going through some bad vibes. And this helped. Great write! I applaud you for the vivid show of emotion. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I ca relate a lot also thats why its a loved poem Kate |
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eternally_singing Member
since 2007-12-18
Posts 123PA, United States |
Very well written. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow I rarely ever come in to dark but I saw your poem liked the title read it... and wow you really made me remember a lot of stuff I don't know whether i should thank you or not:P but great poem hunn. and Welcome To Passions. Krysti |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
Wow this was a great poem! I also loved the one you did in spanish..great job! |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
this could ba an amazing song to! nto that it's not awesome enough as a poem but...u know. Keep up the awesome writing! (wow i sure and liking the word awesome today) FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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