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Sorrow for the Lost
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Sorrow for the Lost |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
Laughing,playing,having fun It's all good until you lose someone The pain is so deep it hits you at the core Leaving your heart cold and sore Sorrow for all the times you missed Making you angry with yourself, you become p!ssed Blaming yourself for having no control While visiting their grave on a lonely knoll You sit and cry for just a while Remembering days when you were vile Wishing you could take it all back The guilt leaves your heart with a crack Never quite knowing if you were forgiven Or if they even made it into heaven [This message has been edited by The_Nameless_One (12-28-2007 03:10 PM).] |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
You sound good. You sound like a coward, and this is not an insult. -GIS I am Happy me... |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
I really felt the flow from this. Nice write. "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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The_Nameless_One Member
since 2007-01-20
Posts 165Missouri |
please explain how feeling remorse and sadness for losing someone you love is cowardly |
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