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Summers day
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Summers day |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
it is a warm summers day you can even smell the hay birds are singing, bees are buzzing, its the sound of paradise enjoy the air as the kids sing and play, this world it knows no vice then I come across a sight no one should have known in the backyard of a family home i saw, hanging from a tree a child of only three something thats stupid but works isn't stupid |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
Nice write, That's why I wrote a poem including you in it. |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
As I started reading this poem I wondered what was so dark about it... until I reached the end. Very good, you set up the reader for a fall that you do not see coming. I liked it. |
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