Dark Poetry #4 |
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What I have from you |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
You make me laugh, you make me smile everything you do, you make it worthwhile whenever I'm sad, you'd look in my eyes you'd say my name once, and say don't cry I love it when you're there when you're with me, I know you care no matter how many times I would deny you'd tell me to do my best and just try the sound of your voice, tingles down my spine to know your my best friend, your there, all mine how is it possible to feel such love when sometimes inside, I feel I never give enough your touch was so sweet and your love is so pure and yet everything you do, always seems sure when you're happy inside I'm happy too although I may not show it I care so much about you I don't wantyou to leave I don't want you to go I just thought that I should tell you I just wanted to let you know no matter how many bad times we come to I'll always love you so Kate |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Good morning doll! I really love this one. The rhyming pattern changed halfway through which threw me off but it's well written. ~~~May~~~ Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
well its about my best friend i know but it was really personal Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
YEA THIS IS STILL TRUE!! I GUESS!! MY BFF! Kate |
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