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Forbidden Love |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Is there such thing as forbidden love? Can there ever be a time, when you feel its enough? Is it possible to fall out of love? When it seems that for so long you were in it? Why is it when two people should be together, it seems that it never last forever How can best friends fall in love? then everythings gone, theres no trust Some people just don't feel the same way so does that mean they'll be okay? One will move on, with a fresh new start One will go home, with a broken heart |
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SecretTemptation New Member
since 2007-11-23
Posts 8US |
i love it, and can totally relate... =] InThisForbiddenLove.. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you I wrote it about 2 of my friends and I guess you could say it relates to me also. Kate |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Kate... well written, first and foremost... but on a personal note... this hits a spot deep inside... it makes me think of many things... of the 'best friend' that I had as kid with that turned into my 'worst enemy'... of the 'high school crush' that I didn't see for years... this boy that I thought about for 15 years and never got closure on.. then saw him last summer and really 'saw' him. He was living with his parents, became 'nothing'. this is the poem that strikes that chord that few can Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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Assassin_of_Verse Member
since 2007-10-23
Posts 330that So Cal |
"How can best friends fall in love? then everythings gone, theres no trust" This is one of my fears, falling for a friend... But if such love was not so confusing and difficult to work out, would it be worth it? Thought-invoking questions. We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you very much like I said glad people can relate Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
WELL I GUESS IT'S JUST FRIEND LOVE? Kate |
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