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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2007-10-29 08:26 AM



Is there such thing as forbidden love?

Can there ever be a time, when you feel its enough?

Is it possible to fall out of love?

When it seems that for so long you were in it?

Why is it when two people should be together,

it seems that it never last forever

How can best friends fall in love?

then everythings gone, theres no trust

Some people just don't feel the same way

so does that mean they'll be okay?

One will move on, with a fresh new start

One will go home, with a broken heart


© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
SecretTemptation
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since 2007-11-23
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1 posted 2007-11-23 11:21 PM


i love it, and can totally relate...


=]

InThisForbiddenLove..
YouAreMySecretTemptation...
AndImYourDirtyLittleSecret....

voice2bheard
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2 posted 2007-11-25 11:01 AM


Thank you I wrote it about 2 of my friends and I guess you could say it relates to me also.

Kate

Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
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3 posted 2007-12-03 02:27 AM


Kate... well written, first and foremost... but  on a personal note...

this hits a spot deep inside... it makes me think of many things... of the 'best friend' that I had as kid with that turned into my 'worst enemy'...

of the 'high school crush' that I didn't see for years... this boy that I thought about for 15 years and never got closure on.. then saw him last summer and really 'saw' him. He was living with his parents, became 'nothing'.

this is the poem that strikes that chord that few can

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
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that So Cal
4 posted 2007-12-03 07:51 PM


"How can best friends fall in love?
then everythings gone, theres no trust"

This is one of my fears, falling for a friend...
But if such love was not so confusing and difficult to work out, would it be worth it?

Thought-invoking questions.

We are each of us angels with only one wing. And we can only fly by embracing each other.
-Luciano De Creshenzo

An assassin-in-training shouldn't.

voice2bheard
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5 posted 2007-12-04 10:38 AM


Thank you very much like I said glad people can relate

Kate

voice2bheard
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6 posted 2009-12-16 05:02 AM


WELL I GUESS IT'S JUST FRIEND LOVE?

Kate

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