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DISLIKE
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Not a great one but i thought I would throw it out. DISLIKE . So many things we come to dislike So many people As we stare at our reflection As we look upon the olden day image We never thought we would live to see So reckless in youth We so believed we would die young One day In some unknown street As the sun shines brightly We stare at our reflection Disliking what we see Wondering why our bodies Always going forward Forgot to die with us |
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moondogz Member
since 2007-05-01
Posts 397Great White North |
What could be lonlier than an ignored poem, like a child's first day at school..torn from the safety of its home. It breaks my heart to see a poem dismissed by being ignored...I love your work Seeker. |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Why thank you sire. It wouldn't be the first poem I've posted that was ignored. I never take it to heart. ;-) |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Hey doll.... love the last few lines: Wondering why our bodies Always going forward Forgot to die with us I always love your work doll! Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
M'Lady. As always you make me blush. |
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