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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA 
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there was a time in my life i may never see again like a ship on the horizon slowly growing dim i hear the songs of yesterday playing in my head i see my dreams so far away slowly coming in people come and they go they never stay the same and i sit and wonder how long this one will remain memory lane, take me away back to the good places i've been show me the way, call out my name carry me back, memory lane i saw your gentle face today as it flashed through my mind just like it was so long ago but neatly froze in time i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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Mad_Hatter Member
since 2003-06-29
Posts 393Canada |
ahh yes. To wish that what was once could still be. I've been there, so many times. The future just never seems as great as parts of the past. Very nicely written. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
If this isn't lyrics from a song you've written, then shame on you. You succeeded in taking me back to places I've been, and I'll read this one over and over again just to go there. Kinda made me want to move to that street, as this one I'm on sorta sucks. A most "memorable" write, and that wasn't meant to be such a bad cliche as to make you want to freeze me in time. KUDOS! Lose one friend... Lose all friends... Lose Yourself... |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Beautiful. Nice work. Hollow. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
thank you all. i've still got a lot to learn, being a newbie and reading all of your exceptional poetry. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
"people come and they go they never stay the same and i sit and wonder how long this one will remain" Makes me wonder too, EveGnosis. coyote 8) |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yes this is true. I guess thats what reminds us of the fact that what we choose is our choice and we are the ones that will truly be stuck with whatever outcome. -GIS He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11 |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I read this poem again, and it means even more to me now. Thank you, it was beautiful. Hollow. Courts. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michael: I adore this, it seems that Autumn brings this out in all of us: memory lane, take me away back to the good places i've been show me the way, call out my name carry me back, memory lane [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-21-2004 04:02 PM).] |
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fromme2U Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257 |
This was such a beautiful poem. your eyes tell a lot. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
This is beautiful doll... it's one that I had to read a couple of times because I truly adore it. Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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