Dark Poetry #4 |
EYE |
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I see everything, everything you do I am just here, I follow you I see what you write and how everythings in black and white the pictures around you, all a blur and everything that happens, or undisturbed when you're open you leave a mark but when you're closed, everything is dark you won't let others see how you truely are but to me inside, you're a shining star if only you would let everything out let everyone see what you're really about don't just look and walk away let them know what you have to say I can't tell you what to do, stop living in fear all I can do, is give you tears show everyone you're devotion all I can do is show your emotions Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
"Eye" is about someones actual eye being the narrator seeing everything that goes on in the persons life, that the eyeball can't do anything its just there only the human can. Kate |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
I really like this one a lot. It is well written doll |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
thank you!!! Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I STILL LOVE IT!! Kate |
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