START ALL OVER - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Dark Poetry #4

START ALL OVER

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-11-09 10:47 AM

Siometimes when I close my eyes

its just so hard to recognize

like I just want to disappear

and noone will know that I'm here

I just want to throw it all away

start all over with a brand new day

leave my anger and sadness behind

start all over give my life another try

forget about my pains and worries

and let somebody finally get to know me

but is that so easy to do?

start all over with a brand new you

for the last five years

I've been so depressed, afraid and cried tears

every week I always had a breakdown

somehow I manage to do it when noones around

I always feel so alone, even when people are around me

but I just keep it all in and noone sees

why does my life have to be this way,

isn't there something I could do, something I could say

because I don't want to throw my life away

hold on, take a breath, one step back,

there must be something in my life, something I lack

" Start all over, fresh and new"

my mind says to me

" One day soon it'll come to you

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-11-09 10:54 AM

This poem says that you shopuldn't live in the past make your life last do what you wna to do if something bad happens make it better!!!

Kate

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2007-11-11 08:08 PM

This is really nice... though the rhythm seems to go off track in the middle.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-11-13 10:37 AM

thanks "doll"

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2009-12-16 05:09 AM

YES I WISH!!

Kate

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.