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Dark Poetry #4

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sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

0 posted 2007-11-03 04:26 PM

(Disclaimer: This is symbolic, it is not about, nor is it meant to promote, self-harm of any kind)

LOST:

I watch the blood spill from my arm
As the tears spill from my eyes
I wait for the warning, the silent alarm
But it doesn't; no one hears my cries

The light tower burns from a faraway place
But it doesn't guide my way
My mind throws me through time and space
The end light-years away

When does the hurt every begin to fade
When will the terror subside?
From now until the end displayed
My answer: silence replied

-Sylvia, 29/01/06-

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2007-11-03 07:28 PM

wow this is really great. can totally relate. good job

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

2 posted 2007-11-03 11:43 PM

intense...I could really tell that your heart was in what you wrote...It spoke to me

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

3 posted 2007-11-03 11:57 PM

Sylvia.... this was amazing.... it gave me that feeling inside of my chest that only comes with truly emotional pieces.

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