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Prudy
Junior Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 13
the prison inside me

0 posted 2007-10-30 11:56 PM


I wish I didn't know,
the warmth in your eyes,
the kindness in your heart,
the tender beauty of your soul.

The more I know, the more I miss,
The more I hurt.


© Copyright 2007 Rodolfo Cavalcanti - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2007-10-31 11:00 AM


I love your wrting and again it reminds me of someone I used to date, and still are in love with, I feel the same way.
trUstNooNe
Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91

2 posted 2007-11-02 11:04 PM


Very True*
Mystress May
Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296
Taunton, MA
3 posted 2007-11-03 11:59 PM


Prudy.... I love it but it seems like a piece of something bigger. It seems unfinished to me.... does that make sense?
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