When did I say that I love you

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Dark Poetry #4

When did I say that I love you

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-11-02 09:02 AM

When did I say that I love you

When did I look into your eyes and say I do

What makes you think I thought about you

I can't believe every word you said, I thought was true

when did I say thta I love you

and right in front of me

I was so blind, I couldn't see

Oh God when did I say

when did I say, that I love you

Kate

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

1 posted 2007-11-04 12:27 PM

I like it. It leaves me hanging though... I feel as though it's the beginning of something more.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

2 posted 2007-11-05 10:46 AM

Yes originally its one of my songs, but I also decided to make it a poem

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2009-12-16 05:15 AM

UH OH ABOUT A BAD EX!!

Kate

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