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Alaina
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since 2007-06-16
Posts 106


0 posted 2007-10-25 09:09 PM



Today I felt like leaving,
Ending this story here.
I've spent enough time spelling out my feelings.
It's time I've locked up my soul,
and buried it with my body.

Downed a couple more,
Carved a little deeper.
That's what I did today.
Sat down and cried,
Prayed that it would all go my way.

Break down my self
And inspect what's lying deep inside.
Please, won't someone look through my tunnel
And connect with me, today.

So today, I downed a couple more,
Carved a little deeper...
Then I realized it was too late,
And waited for my eyes to glaze over.

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

© Copyright 2007 Alaina - All Rights Reserved
angelfacegurl
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since 2008-04-17
Posts 67
Swartz Creek, MI
1 posted 2008-12-18 10:53 AM


its never too late im here if u EVER need someone to talk to dont give up lifes bein played on us as were playin other games remember just fight harder!!

britt


prize
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since 2008-11-21
Posts 116

2 posted 2008-12-19 12:46 PM


Alaina, britt is right!  Thanks for your post, but take care of yourself.  From your poem, it reads to me that you are a cutter - same here.  You can email me anytime.  I understand.

P

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